- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 17:56, 17 September 2013 (UTC)
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Bicolored shrew edit
- ... that when danger threatens, one of the young of the bicolored shrew grips its mother while the others join on behind forming a chain?
- Reviewed: Cupiennius salei
5x expanded by Cwmhiraeth (talk). Self nominated at 10:22, 14 September 2013 (UTC).
The article technically meets the DYK criteria but the lead is a bit wonky. I can't stick a problem tag on it as there's no issue per the DYK criteria as such as this meets the timeliness, size and citation requirements. The however seems to just be a list of the locations (and probable locations) for the shrew and doesn't summarise the other elements of the article. Also, the creator forgot to pipe Georgia the country, so it is currently listed as Georgia (country) in the lead. I'm going to stick a note on Cwmhiraeth's talk page to alert them to this. Miyagawa (talk) 10:58, 14 September 2013 (UTC)
- You are quite right. The lead consisted of the unchanged whole of the original article before I expanded it and was very boring. I have improved it now. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 11:35, 14 September 2013 (UTC)
