Template:Did you know nominations/Bangladeshis in India

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The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 11:18, 31 August 2013 (UTC)

Bangladeshis in India edit

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... that the Indian government estimated in 2007 that there were up to 20 million Bangladeshis in India illegally?

Reviewed: Did you know nominations/Six Men Getting Sick (Six Times)

Created/expanded by Darkness Shines (talk). Self nominated at 11:47, 6 August 2013 (UTC).

I can't see any citation for the hook fact, the standard of English is poor, needs thorough copy-edit. Length OK, Hook length OK. No obvious copy-vio, no dab-links, no dead links. Jezhotwells (talk) 15:26, 20 August 2013 (UTC)

The ref got moved, it is now restored. Darkness Shines (talk) 17:50, 20 August 2013 (UTC)

OK, assume good faith for hook citation. The prose is very poor. Can you get someone to copy edit it? Jezhotwells (talk) 09:58, 21 August 2013 (UTC)

I will file a request at the GOCE, but dunno how long they will be, I do not have time to do it myself as I am in the middle of a FA nomination and a 5x expansion. Darkness Shines (talk) 10:06, 21 August 2013 (UTC)
@Jezhotwells: Well GOCE where uber quick and have copyedited it already Darkness Shines (talk) 19:11, 22 August 2013 (UTC)

That is much better. Good to go. Jezhotwells (talk) 15:07, 30 August 2013 (UTC)