The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 09:07, 26 October 2017 (UTC)

Baloke

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Created by Fitindia (talk). Self-nominated at 16:58, 17 October 2017 (UTC).

  • Writing "National Basketball Association" in full is better as not everyone knows what the NBA could be referring to. Jon Kolbert (talk) 14:56, 18 October 2017 (UTC)
@Jon Kolbert: yes I think ALT1 is better. Thank you.  FITINDIA  15:32, 18 October 2017 (UTC)
@Fitindia: Perfect. QPQ done, hook is good to go. Jon Kolbert (talk) 15:53, 18 October 2017 (UTC)
@Fitindia: please address the clarification tag that I added. I edited the page for English grammar; please also check that I didn't add/erase something by mistake. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 20:48, 25 October 2017 (UTC)
@Yoninah: thank you for the edit, looks much better now. I have added the citation that was required. Thank you.  FITINDIA  03:51, 26 October 2017 (UTC)
@Fitindia: thank you. While you quoted the source accurately, the sex ratios don't make sense. A ratio is a figure like 1:1 (one out of one), not a single number like 905. Unless this figure means 905 out of 1000? Perhaps you have a different source for the average sex ratio and child sex ratio? Yoninah (talk) 08:49, 26 October 2017 (UTC)
@Yoninah: yes the figures are out of 1000. Thank you for pointing that out. I have added it to the article.  FITINDIA  08:59, 26 October 2017 (UTC)
Thanks. Wow, India has so many more males than females? Restoring tick per Jon Kolbert's review. Yoninah (talk) 09:06, 26 October 2017 (UTC)