Template:Did you know nominations/Aram Karamanoukian
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The result was: promoted by sst✈ 07:26, 5 October 2015 (UTC)
ALT1 promoted with image
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Aram Karamanoukian edit
Syrian lieutenant-general Aram Karamanoukian
- ... that Syrian general Aram Karamanoukian (pictured) received medals from numerous countries including Egypt, Armenia, Lebanon, Syria, and France?
Created by EtienneDolet (talk). Self-nominated at 08:17, 4 September 2015 (UTC).
New enough and long enough. Sources seem fine and the article is well cited, as is the hook fact. One thing though, I think the hook needs amending; it talks about Karamanoukian receiving medals from countries "including" the five listed, implying that there were others, but there appear to be no more. I'm also not sure it's as interesting as it could be. How about something like the following? Prioryman (talk) 09:56, 5 September 2015 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that Aram Karamanoukian (pictured) became a Syrian general after surviving the Armenian Genocide and was awarded medals from Egypt, Armenia, Lebanon, Syria, and France?
- @Prioryman: Agreed. ALT1 looks good to me! Étienne Dolet (talk) 10:00, 5 September 2015 (UTC)
