Template:Did you know nominations/Aiguille de Bionnassay

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by The Squirrel Conspiracy (talk) 01:29, 4 December 2015 (UTC)

Aiguille de Bionnassay edit

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Summit of Aiguille de Bionnassay

... that in 1865 the first alpine climbers to reach the summit of the Aiguille de Bionnassay (pictured) arrived in a thunderstorm, their ice axes humming with electrical activity?

ALT1:... that when Florence Crauford Grove and party first climbed the Aiguille de Bionnassay (pictured) in 1865 they reached the summit in a thunderstorm with their ice axes humming with static electricity?
ALT2:... that the longest glacier in Italy, the Miage Glacier, begins on the south east side of the Aiguille de Bionnassay (pictured)?
Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Michiyo Tsujimura
Comment: the source of the hook fact can be found at end of p.327 of the Google books link to account by F.C.Grove, 1866.

5x expanded by Parkywiki (talk). Self-nominated at 17:43, 10 November 2015 (UTC).

This article is a five-fold expansion and is new enough and long enough. I have struck ALT2 as being less interesting and I like the original hook best. The image is appropriately licensed. The hook facts are in a lengthy Précis of the first ascent and confirmed by the Google book source. The article is neutral and seems to be free of copyright issues. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:24, 30 November 2015 (UTC)

This is a very classy hook. I thought about running it in the quirky slot, but the image is so beautiful that it really deserves a lead slot. However, several paragraphs lack any cite at all, per Rule D2. The nominator also has 5 DYK credits, so a QPQ should be submitted with this nomination. Yoninah (talk) 23:01, 1 December 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for your feedback, Yoninah. I'm afraid this was my first self-nominated DYK, and, boy, did I struggle to understand all the processes. However, I did do a QPQ immediately afterwards, but I'm afraid I didn't know how to retrospectively edit my DYK template to show this. Do please see the template for Michiyo Tsujimura which I did on 11 November. Is this acceptable? I will gladly nip back and add inline citations to all paragraphs in the article, though they will be repeats from previous ones, I fear. Thanks for your nice feedback.Parkywiki (talk) 23:28, 1 December 2015 (UTC)

QPQ done. (I slotted it in above.) Yoninah (talk) 23:35, 1 December 2015 (UTC)

Thanks. Extra inline citations now added to the article, too. Regards, Parkywiki (talk) 01:39, 2 December 2015 (UTC)

Confirming my tick. I agree with Yoninah that this deserves an image slot. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:35, 2 December 2015 (UTC)