Template:Did you know nominations/56 Artillery Lane

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:06, 15 May 2016 (UTC)

56 Artillery Lane edit

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~~... that Grade I listed building 56 Artillery Lane is now used as a free art exhibition space?~~

Reviewed: CMLL Torneo Nacional de Parejas Increibles (2016)

Created by Joseph2302 (talk). Self-nominated at 16:16, 8 May 2016 (UTC).

New article, short but long enough for our criteria, no possible copyvios detected, QPQ done, hook checks out fine and we are ready to go. §§Dharmadhyaksha§§ {Talk / Edits} 06:34, 9 May 2016 (UTC)

Needs to say where this is (in London). Johnbod (talk) 13:50, 10 May 2016 (UTC)

ALT1: ... that the Grade I listed building 56 Artillery Lane in London is now used as a free art exhibition space?
Johnbod & Dharmadhyaksha Is this hook better? Joseph2302 (talk) 16:02, 10 May 2016 (UTC)

ALT 1 is good. §§Dharmadhyaksha§§ {Talk / Edits} 03:53, 11 May 2016 (UTC)

Yes, but can we use English grammar and have "that the...."? Johnbod (talk) 03:59, 11 May 2016 (UTC)

Fixed. §§Dharmadhyaksha§§ {Talk / Edits} 05:55, 11 May 2016 (UTC)