Talk:Zheng Gu Shui
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Written with bias edit
This article is written in the active form, it declares "I stress..." etc. Needs improvement. Also implies objective topics, such as "Qi" are fact in the given context, with implied bias. That is to say, it reads as instructions from a book of Traditional Chinese Medicine. Improvements would include changing the point of view to read passively, and indicating where ideas are part of a belief system, as opposed to verifiable theory. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 120.145.158.225 (talk) 13:08, 11 March 2013 (UTC)
It should be understood by previous editor, that each healing art proposes its own theories. This is not limited to Chinese medicine and includes, of course, Western medicine. The function of the doctor is to understand the symptoms of the patient, what other circumstances the patient is experiencing in life etc. Each medicine reacts differently with each person, but certain trends can be anticipated. So, with an emphasis to the editor, question all absolutes and anyone who says they have 'the facts' rather than theories. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 64.231.83.4 (talk) 14:28, 18 November 2013 (UTC) It seems to be an advertisement.173.176.120.156 (talk) 14:22, 26 March 2014 (UTC)