Talk:Yuki Bhambri/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: NapHit (talk · contribs) 20:00, 10 September 2012 (UTC)

Multiple prose, referencing and formatting issues constituting a quick fail. Will list some issues below, remember the GA process is not a substitute for a peer review, where these can be fixed before coming here.

• Lead is far too shore, please see WP:LEAD. It should summarise the content of the whole article.
• Personal life section reads just like a list of facts, with every sentence starting with "He..." nowhere near the standard required
• "Yuki was always good..." a factually inaccurate and poor wording, what constitutes good, he's certainly not as good as nadal is he
• "6-3, 6-1..." those hyphens should be en dashes, any scoreline or date range should use en dashes rather than hyphens
• "He competed in all the Junior Grand Slam Tournaments in 2008, He lost in 2008 Australian Open Boys' Singles in the semi-finals to eventual champion Bernard Tomic. He lost in the first round of the French Open Boys' Singles and Wimbledon Boys' Singles. He made it to the second round of U.S. Open Boys' Singles before losing to his doubles partner He played in three Junior Grand Slam Doubles tournaments partnering with Karunuday Singh at the Australian Open Boys' Doubles losing in the first round, Ilija Vujic at the French Open Boys' Doubles losing in the second round, and Filip Krajinović at the U.S. Open Boys' Doubles losing in the first round." A whole paragraph just listing what happened in substandard writing and not referenced
• "For the sponsorship, Mahindra Holidays will avail of promotional and advertising rights..." makes no sense
• References are not formatted correctly, no publishers, or access dates for the majority, some just have link provided. They need to be formatted correctly please see MOS:REF for more info.
• Too many external links per WP:EL