Talk:Yugoslav destroyer Zagreb/GA1

Latest comment: 7 years ago by Sturmvogel 66 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 05:04, 6 November 2016 (UTC)Reply


I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 05:04, 6 November 2016 (UTC)Reply

  • Image properly licensed.
  • External links OK, no DABs.
  • Tell the reader in the lede how many ships were in the class, i.e. "second of three"
  • Link: sister ship, division
  • It seems a bit odd to put the crew data in the middle of the general description paragraph as it breaks up the flow. Perhaps at the end of the first paragraph?
  • Short but sweet.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:29, 6 November 2016 (UTC)Reply