Talk:Yue Hwa Building/GA1

Latest comment: 10 years ago by QatarStarsLeague in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague (talk · contribs) 15:06, 17 June 2014 (UTC)Reply

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar):  
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):  
    b (citations to reliable sources):  
    c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):  
    b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  

Overall:
Pass/Fail:  

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1b. The needs to be expanded to appropriately summarize the entire article. See this page.
2b. Note, I have made a few changes to the in-line citations.
6a. I added an image.
7. If not for the insufficient lead, this article would pass. Until such time as the lead adequately summarizes the article, I can't pass the article.

@QatarStarsLeague: I have rewritten the lead section. How is the new lead section? It may need some copyediting. --Hildanknight (talk) 04:31, 19 June 2014 (UTC)Reply
It is suitable; the article passes! QatarStarsLeague (talk) 05:19, 19 June 2014 (UTC)Reply