Talk:You Lost Me/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wikipedian Penguin (talk · contribs) 23:28, 14 October 2013 (UTC)

I promised the nominator that I would take on this review. Sorry about the delay, but I'll get started as soon as I'm free. The Wikipedian Penguin 23:28, 14 October 2013 (UTC)

Spotcheck and sources

• "In August 2008, Australian recording artist Sia Furler confirmed that she would work on several ballads for Aguilera's then-upcoming 'futuristic' album."—quotation regarding "futuristic" is in neither of the sources cited.

 Fixed removed.

• "On June 22, 2010, 'You Lost Me' was announced to be released as the third single in the US and the second internationally from Bionic..."—source does not go into this much detail.

 Fixed

• The song is a pop ballad and lasts for a duration of 4:17 (four minutes and 17 seconds)."—none of the sources say this is pop. The iTunes ref says the album in general is pop only.

 Fixed

• "Aguilera performed 'You Lost Me' for the first time at the season finale of the ninth season of American Idol on May 26, 2010."—not mentioned that it's the ninth season.

 Fixed added reference.

• "According to James Dinh from MTV News, the performance of 'You Lost Me' was the best during the show..."—Dinh doesn't say it's the best.

 Fixed

• What makes Neon Limelight a reliable source? The Wikipedian Penguin 21:37, 19 October 2013 (UTC)

 Fixed — Simon (talk) 10:37, 1 November 2013 (UTC)

Note: I have begun copy editing the article and will post comments here if required. The Wikipedian Penguin 13:46, 3 November 2013 (UTC)

Prose

• "The track is a down-tempo ballad that talks about an unfaithful man, who has left Aguilera's world 'infected'."—quotation needs to be cited.

• It's in the lead, so I think it does not need to be cited? — Simon (talk) 04:48, 13 November 2013 (UTC)

  Quotations are an exception. The Wikipedian Penguin 22:56, 13 November 2013 (UTC)

   Fixed — Simon (talk) 09:00, 14 November 2013 (UTC)

Wikipedian Penguin, if there aren't any more notes, can you make a decision and close the review?--Вик Ретлхед (talk) 23:26, 18 November 2013 (UTC)

Sorry, I'll finish up ASAP. The Wikipedian Penguin 01:45, 20 November 2013 (UTC)

I think I can pass this article as a GA now. I'm sorry for taking so long. I had no idea that real life would creep up on me so badly, but congratulations nonetheless. The Wikipedian Penguin 01:58, 20 November 2013 (UTC)