Talk:Xuanwu Gate Incident/GA1
Latest comment: 8 years ago by Tomandjerry211 (alt) in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk · contribs) 15:09, 25 August 2015 (UTC)
- Only a few comments:
- Make sure you order the long citations correctly.
- Link Li Jiancheng at first mention
- Many duplicate links
- It is unecessary to put citations like this: "The sun is red.[1] The sun is hot.[1]"
- It is unecessary to put citations in the lead
- Add identifiers for the first two refs.
--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 15:09, 25 August 2015 (UTC)
- I'll have to fail it, due to no action being taken in more than seven days.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 23:45, 2 September 2015 (UTC)--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 23:45, 2 September 2015 (UTC)