Talk:Wipeout HD/GA1
Latest comment: 7 years ago by Freikorp in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Freikorp (talk · contribs) 06:05, 10 March 2017 (UTC)
I'll take this one. Freikorp (talk) 06:06, 10 March 2017 (UTC)
- Is it reasonably well written?
- "with many players complaining of extended loading times" - perhaps clarify that the advertisements were causing the loading times - I had to skip ahead to the relevant area to confirm this as I found the sentence confusing. How about "with many players complaining of the extended loading times it caused."
- "The race mode will only end after the destruction of the player's ship" - so just clarifying - as the destruction is inevitable the aim of the game here is just to survive as long as possible/see who can survive the longest?
- "Eliminator mode is taken directly from Wipeout Pulse centres around players destroying other competitors for points and finishing laps" - I think this sentence is missing something grammatically.
- 'Trophy' is piped twice, to two different destinations, one of which appears to have since been moved.
- What is Double Fusion? A brief indication would be of interest.
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. Has an appropriate reference section:
- Some references use the article's name (IGN) whereas others use the base url (uk.ps3.ign.com).
- Checklinks finds a few things that could be fixed: [1]
- I do recommend you archive your sources in order to help the article retain its promotion, but this isn't a GA criteria.
- B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. Has an appropriate reference section:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- As indicated by article history and talk page.
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- I'm assuming it isn't an issue to have two fair use screenshots within the one game.
- It shouldn't be, as I've seen a few FAs with at least three of them in. Super Mario Galaxy passed its FAC with four non-free images in, so I think it shouldn't be a problem as long as they help illustrate the topic—which they all do in this case JAGUAR 17:15, 13 March 2017 (UTC)
- I'm assuming it isn't an issue to have two fair use screenshots within the one game.
- B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
Always impressed with your WipeOut articles. Looking forward to promoting this one once minor issues are addressed. Freikorp (talk) 01:54, 12 March 2017 (UTC)