Talk:Why Does It Hurt So Bad/GA1
Latest comment: 13 years ago by Candyo32 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Candyo32 - Merry CHRISTmas :) 19:43, 27 December 2010 (UTC)
Lead
edit- Better to just say 1996 MTV Movie Awards
- Done
Composition
edit- Link R&B ballad.
- Done
- Questioning Pandora reliability, see on your talk.
- Removed Pandora reference. Done
Reception
edit"Sailed" isn't very common so put it in quotation marks
- Done
- TIME is a magazine so say of TIME not of the TIME
- Done
- To avoid using those brackets, say "...of TIME say Houston "particularly held her own," with a "masterly balance of pop zip and soulful melancholy."
- Done
- Put Shoop Shopp in quotations as it is a song.
- Done
Music video
edit- Most articles would say 1996 MTV Movie Awards.
- Done
Everything else unnoted sounds good ! Candyo32 - Merry CHRISTmas :) 19:43, 27 December 2010 (UTC)