Talk:Who Am I (Casting Crowns song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 23:43, 20 June 2013 (UTC)

Info box

• Genres should be alphabetical
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 18:15, 24 June 2013 (UTC)

Lead

• released on February 22, 2004 as → Need a comma after 2004
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 18:15, 24 June 2013 (UTC)
• Just use self-titled instead of eponymous
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 18:15, 24 June 2013 (UTC)
• from their debut album. → on the album.
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 18:15, 24 June 2013 (UTC)

Background and recording

• The stray solo sentence should just be part of the paragraph
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 18:15, 24 June 2013 (UTC)
• kids → children, more formal.
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 18:15, 24 June 2013 (UTC)
• Rename this Background and composition and have the composition section as a second paragraph in this section.
  • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 18:15, 24 June 2013 (UTC)

Reception

Have this all as one section with no sub-sectioning. Try avoid really small, short sections. It's okay to merge some things together. Otherwise it just looks sparse.

• • Done. Toa Nidhiki05 18:15, 24 June 2013 (UTC)

Live performances and other uses

• Try and have two even paragraphs, the first one is massive and the second one is only two lines.
  • I've made it have three - two roughly equal ones discussing concerts, and the final discussing other uses. Does that work? Toa Nidhiki05 18:15, 24 June 2013 (UTC)
    • Yeah it works actually.  — AARON • ^TALK 18:28, 24 June 2013 (UTC)
• Shouldn't really have this second audio file.
  • Removed. Toa Nidhiki05 18:15, 24 June 2013 (UTC)

Charts

• No need to write "Weekly" above the table
  • Removed. Toa Nidhiki05 18:15, 24 June 2013 (UTC)

Certifications

• Should have it's own section, and try formatting it like this: [1]
  • Good suggestion - I did not know there was a certification table, but it looks much better. Done. Toa Nidhiki05 18:15, 24 June 2013 (UTC)
    • :-)  — AARON • ^TALK 18:28, 24 June 2013 (UTC)

Status

Again,a fairly short article so not much to review or fix. On hold.  — AARON • ^TALK 15:59, 24 June 2013 (UTC)

All issues should be addressed now. Toa Nidhiki05 18:15, 24 June 2013 (UTC)

Passing. Well done.  — AARON • ^TALK 18:28, 24 June 2013 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.