Talk:What More Can I Give/GA1

Latest comment: 14 years ago by CrowzRSA in topic GA Review

GA Review

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GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): The Grammar and spelling are correct, and the prose is clear.  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): Not enough references in "Recording"

 

There are no more sources available. Everything in that section is sourced. Pyrrhus16 01:45, 27 January 2010 (UTC)Reply


b (citations to reliable sources):  

  1. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): it addresses the main aspects of the topic   b (focused):  
  2. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:   Review: this article is being reviewed (additional comments are welcome).
  3. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  4. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  5. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  
  • Add link to Spanish language and italicize it
  • Done.
  • Change link form "anti-[[South Africa under apartheid|apartheid]]" to "[[South Africa under apartheid|anti-apartheid]]"
  • Done.
  • In "Background and writing," put quote box in for quote at the bottom of the section<blockquote class="toccolours" style="text-align:left; width:30%; float:left; margin:0 20px 10px 0; display:table;">'''insert text here'''</blockquote>
  • The quote is already a blockquote. The above formatting moves the quote to the left side, making the last sentence in the paragraph useless.
  • Do same thing as listed above to "Airplay's" quote.
  • This is in a quotebox and the blockquote formatting doesn't allow for quote attribution to the person that has made the remark.
  • On the "Artists Involved" table, take off question marks
  • Done.
  • Resolution of cover art images should be lowered if possible, they're a bit big.

Reviewer: CrowzRSA 22:52, 22 January 2010 (UTC)Reply

Thank you for your comments thus far. :) Pyrrhus16 00:08, 23 January 2010 (UTC)Reply

This GAN has passed, and this is now a good article! If you found this review helpful, please consider helping out a fellow editor by reviewing another good article nomination. Help and advice on how to do so is available here, and you can ask for the help of a GAN mentor, if you wish.

Congratulations, CrowzRSA 21:16, 27 January 2010 (UTC)Reply