Talk:What Makes You Beautiful/GA1

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Reviewer: TheSpecialUser (talk · contribs) 01:55, 30 July 2012 (UTC) Wow! So close to GA this time... TheSpecialUser ^TSU 01:55, 30 July 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for reviewing AdabowtheSecond (talk) 13:44, 30 July 2012 (UTC)

Review

I enjoyed reading this article. :) Have to say, it is a potential WP:FA in future!

• In the lead, "What Makes You Beautiful" received positive reviews from music critics, whom highlighted its appeal to the teenage audience and pop sensibility. "What Makes You Beautiful" debuted at number one on the UK Singles Chart, after setting a Sony Music Entertainment pre-order record and selling 153,965 copies in its first week. -> The song received positive reviews from music critics, who highlighted its appeal to the teenage audience and pop sensibility. It made its debut at number one spot on the UK Singles Chart, after setting a Sony Music Entertainment pre-order record and selling 153,965 copies in its first week.
• In the lead, "What Makes You Beautiful" won the BRIT Award for Best British Single at the 2012 Brit Awards, which was held on 21 February 2012. - replace "What Makes You Beautiful" with The song
• After being formed and finishing third in the seventh series of The X Factor in 2010,[1] One Direction was signed to Syco Music.[2] -> After being formed and finishing third in the seventh series of The X Factor in 2010,[1] One Direction were signed by Syco Music.[2]
• One Direction performed "What Makes You Beautiful" for the first time on Red or Black? on 10 September 2011. -> One Direction performed "What Makes You Beautiful" for the first time at Red or Black? on 10 September 2011.

• Red or Black is a television series isn't on more appropriate AdabowtheSecond (talk) 02:52, 1 August 2012 (UTC)

• Opps... Didn't notice that. Sorry. TheSpecialUser ^TSU 05:35, 1 August 2012 (UTC)

• One Direction sang "What Makes You Beautiful" to open telethon Children in Need 2011 -> The band also performed the song to open telethon Children in Need 2011
• In Italy, the band performed "What Makes You Beautiful" at the 2012 Sanremo Music Festival on 14 February 2012. -> In Italy, the band performed the song at the 2012 Sanremo Music Festival on 14 February 2012.
• In the United States, One Direction performed "What Makes You Beautiful" along with "More than This" and "One Thing" for the first time on The Today Show at the Rockefeller Center, 12 March 2012. -> In the United States, One Direction performed the song along with "More than This" and "One Thing" for the first time at The Today Show at the Rockefeller Center on 12 March 2012.
• They performed "What Makes You Beautiful" at the 2012 Kids' Choice Awards on 31 March 2012 -> They also performedthe song at the 2012 Kids' Choice Awards on 31 March 2012
• One Direction also performed the song on their Up All Night Tour,[85] it was performed as the fourteenth song on the setlist. -> One Direction also performed the song on their Up All Night Tour,[85] and it was performed as the fourteenth song on the setlist.
• Filmed on two days in July 2011,[63][64] it premiered on 19 August 2011.[65] -> Filmed for two days in July 2011,[63][64] it premiered on 19 August 2011.[65]
• In Flanders, Belgium, the song debuted at number 44 and peaked at number 7 - link Flanders
• In Wallonia, Belgium, it debuted at number 44 and peaked at number 19 - link Wallonia
• The single peaked at number 29 and spent twenty-four weeks on the chart -> The single peaked at number 29 and spent twenty-four weeks on that chart
• In Wallonia, Belgium, it debuted at number 44 and peaked at number 19 -> In Wallonia, Belgium, the song made its debut at number 44 and peaked at number 19
• The single debuted at number 49 on the top sixty Swedish Sverigetopplistan -> The single also debuted at number 49 on the top sixty Swedish Sverigetopplistan
• Images need WP:ALT
• Track listing - please use Template:Track listing

Pretty good article. It'll pass easily. TheSpecialUser ^TSU 02:32, 1 August 2012 (UTC)

Have I addressed everything properly AdabowtheSecond (talk) 03:29, 1 August 2012 (UTC)