Talk:What It Feels Like for a Girl/GA1

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Lirim.Z in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Lirim.Z (talk · contribs) 02:18, 19 February 2019 (UTC)Reply

Infobox and lead edit

  • For what region is the cover art? US?
    • mentioned on the caption, is the cover for the US CD maxi single
  • Add download and streaming to formats
    • Disagree, as we only included the formats in which the song as originally released.
  • There should be sources in the lead
    • I disagree with this point as we've never included sources on the leads on the english Wikipedia, I've seen it done frequently on the Spanish one but not here. I'll leave it to @IndianBio: to decide if this is appropriate.

Background and development edit

  • Guy Sigsworth (pictured in xxxx) Add the year, if available   Done

Recording and composition edit

  • Perfect.

Release and remixes edit

  • Add the nationality of Above & Beyond and the year the picture was taken (pictured in xxxx)   Done
  • Initially planned to be the album's second single,[8] "What It Feels Like for a Girl" was eventually released as the album's third single on April 17, 2001. Which single was chosen as the second then?   Done

Critical reception edit

  • music critics Link Music journalism   Done
  • Rikky Rooksby wrote in his book, The Complete Guide to the Music of Madonna Year the book was released?   Done
  • Again English writer Lucy O'Brien (pictured in 2012)   Done
  • Madonna: Like an Icon Year released?   Done

Accolades edit

  • singles in honor of her 60th birthday in which year did she turn 60?   Done

Chart performance edit

  • The release of the DVD single. CD Change the full stop to a comma   Done
  • How many weeks did the song spent in the charts?

Music video edit

  • (pictured in xxxx)   Done
  • nihilistic pissed-off chick Link to Nihilism. Not many people know what that is.   Done
  • Is the budget maybe known?
    • I tried looking but found no proper sources, just fan blogs that differed on the amount
  • Was it banned by MTV for worldwide broadcast or only for MTV in the US?   Done
  • Why is Entertainment Weekly linked again?   Done
  • gave the video a rating of C and opined that On what scale? A to F? A to Z?
    • source only lists rating of C; we don't know the magazine's rating scale

Live performances and cover version edit

  • In which country was the picture taken?
    • There's no way to know in which specific country the picture was taken; hence it's appropriate to just leave it at "...performing it on Drowned World Tour".

Other edit

  • [1] Ref 120 is dead and please check the colour coded refs one more time.
  • 54.3% is way too much. Please try to reduce it.
    • can you please help me out with these ones @IndianBio:?
      • @Lirim.Z: please note that the copyvio links being shown in the tool are Wikimirrors actually and not used in the article. The only one is the SFGate, which let me see. If its quotes I will let it be as that's not part of WP:PLAGIARISM. —IB [ Poke ] 16:07, 26 February 2019 (UTC)Reply

Outcome edit

  •   On hold There are some small things to work on here, but all in all a really good article. This article could even be FA. I'll grant you 7 days to edit the article. Best regards --Lirim | Talk 02:18, 19 February 2019 (UTC)Reply
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