Talk:Westby, Wisconsin

Latest comment: 16 years ago by Josh1billion in topic External links

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This article is written like a personal essay, not in the semi-formal tone expected of an encyclopedia. Someone with familiarity with the subject should address this problem. --Gimme danger 00:39, 16 July 2007 (UTC)Reply

I have made the changes accordingly. --Josh1billion 04:49, 6 October 2007 (UTC)Reply
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I'm unsure whether "www.westby.20m.com" is appropriate to be listed as an external link. It is merely a high school student's personal website and it is written as such. It has some information regarding sports history (this information could be used and cited in the article itself), but other than that, the website is uninformative and is simply an individual's personal website. --Josh1billion 04:49, 6 October 2007 (UTC)Reply