Talk:Weak interaction/GA1

Latest comment: 13 years ago by Tea with toast in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Tea with toast (talk) 03:24, 31 March 2011 (UTC)Reply

Problems needing to be addressed

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The article looks to be in pretty good shape; however, there are several errors in the references:

  • Refs 7 and 11 need more complete publishing info (publisher and ISBN, if available)
  • All books should have ISBN where available. It looks like Refs 3, 10, and 17 need them.
  • I assume that Refs 8 and 9 are citing the same book as Ref 10. Please list the full publishing info for the Cottingham & Greenwood book under the "Texts" subsection, and then complete Refs 8, 9, and 10 with "Cottingham & Greenwood (1986, 2001), p.#"

Other than those details, I am impressed by the quality of the article. I think it does a fairly good job of explaining the more technical things to a lay audience. I am not entirely satisfied by the way the "Weak isospin" and "Weak hypercharge" subsections are presented. They just don't seem to flow very well, and I don't quite understand the subject matter in them and how it relates to the rest of the article (Although this could just be a lack of understanding on my behalf). It is not a large enough problem to prevent me from passing this article, but it should be addressed if this article goes up for FA review (which I hope it does). Overall, great job. --Tea with toast (talk) 04:25, 31 March 2011 (UTC)Reply

OK, I think I've covered the ref issues. #11 isn't a book per se, so I've provided what information I can. Grandiose (me, talk, contribs) 14:16, 2 April 2011 (UTC)Reply

Final review

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GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:  
    B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:  
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:  
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:  
    C. No original research:  
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:  
    B. Focused:  
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:  
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:  
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:  
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:  
    Good job! --Tea with toast (talk) 03:00, 6 April 2011 (UTC)Reply