Talk:Watch the Throne/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 17:45, 31 July 2012 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Info box

• No issues.

Lead

• Link [[Music jouralism|music critics]]

Done Y

Background

• Jay appeared → Jay-Z appeared
• on January of 2011, → in January 2011,
• Jay stated that the less → Jay-Z stated that the less
• that "Life Off" was → Is it mean't to say Life and not Lift?
• Link Frank Ocean in the picture.

All done, "Life Off" was a typo Y

Music and style

• Who is that picture of? What does it have to do with the section?

Clarified the use of the visual, changed photo to one that was easier to decipher the meaning of. Y Done?

Lyrical themes

• No issues.

Content

• Singer Ocean and The-Dream → I assume this is Frank Ocean. Also, it should be "singers", plural.

Done Y

Release and promotion

• No issues.

Singles

• January 11 → Can you add the years to all dates please, as it is getting a bit confusing.

Clarified. Y

• You don't need to keep saying Billboard Hot 100 apart from the first time. Hot 100 is fine from then on.

Done. Y

• peaked at 44. → On the??

Clarified. Y

Critical response

• No issues.

Commercial performance

• Unlink Billboard

Done. Y

• This could be expanded more with some European info.

Expanded. Y Correctly?

Accolades

• No issues.

Track listing

• No issues.

Personnel

• Why are Jay and West not listed as writers?

Added. Y

Charts and certifications

• No issues.
• A release history table would be good.

Unneeded; as explained in the release section, to avoid leaks, the album was released internationally on the same date onto iTunes.

References

• MTV News should not be italics.
• MTV's publisher is Viacom, not MTV Networks.
• FN28 has something wrong with the Rolling Stone link.
• None of the titles should have capitals words.
• FN63 has no date, accessdate etc.
• Remove "The" from "The Official Charts Company". They don't use the "the" anymore.
• FN138 is missing work, publisher.

All done I believe. Y

Summary

On hold for 7 days. Aaron • ^{You Da One} 17:52, 4 August 2012 (UTC)

I believe I have addressed your concerns. Bruce Campbell (talk) 22:08, 4 August 2012 (UTC)

Passing. Aaron • ^{You Da One} 22:19, 4 August 2012 (UTC)