Talk:Vosburg v. Putney

Latest comment: 11 years ago by Wermsker in topic Reboot

Factually Incorrect and Misleading edit

  • Orton wrote for the majority in 78 Wis. 84; 47 N.W. 99; 1890 Wisc. (the first appeal);
VOSBURG, Respondent, vs. PUTNEY, Appellant.
SUPREME COURT OF WISCONSIN
78 Wis. 84; 47 N.W. 99; 1890 Wisc. LEXIS 276
October 20, 1890, Argued; November 5, 1890, Decided
APPEAL from the Circuit Court for Waukesha County.
OPINION: ORTON, J.
  • Lyon wrote for the majority in 80 Wis. 523; 50 N.W. 403; 1891 Wisc. (the second appeal);
VOSBURG, by guardian ad litem, Respondent, vs. PUTNEY, by guardian ad litem, Appellant.
SUPREME COURT OF WISCONSIN
80 Wis. 523; 50 N.W. 403; 1891 Wisc. LEXIS 234
October 26, 1891, Argued; November 17, 1891, Decided
OPINION: LYON, J.
  • defendant (Δ) was George Putney not Hiram Putney;
  • plaintiff (Π) was Andrew Vosburg not Jonathan Vosburg Wermsker (talkcontribs) 06:39, 24 July 2012 (UTC)Reply
  • Father was Seth Vosburg not Andrew Vosburg Wermsker (talk) 06:52, 24 July 2012 (UTC)Reply
  • legally material facts are munged in with irrelevant facts (parents, jobs, wealth);
  • legally material facts are munged ad hoc from both appellate actions;
  • the rule of law is entirely obfuscated;
  • procedural history and facts are intermingled;
  • issue and holding are munged, and thus incorrect (mixing actions);
  • most importantly, there are ZERO citations/references.

Due to the sheer volume of changes necessary to hack this into something accurate (or something that won't shame a 1L under professorial cross), I submit this as justification to reboot this topic with a ground-up rewrite (which I am working on now) Wermsker (talk) 05:51, 24 July 2012 (UTC)Reply

Reboot edit

I've completed the rewrite. Mixed audience targeting, I tried to follow these guiding principles:

  1. accurate
  2. informative
  3. concise
  4. student friendly

I was less interested in appealing to the "fully informed" audience that can just as easily read the full case.

I didn't reference page numbers because many editions exist for some of the casebooks. I err'd on the side of credibly verifiable.

While I go a bit deeper than any single casebook, there are some professors that have turned this one case into a full semester launch pad. So I didn't even try to mount a full analysis with all the potential forks.

If, upon reading this rewrite, you become violently ill or emotionally unstable [[File:|18px|link=]], take the appropriate measures to remedy your discomfort. wermsker (ATC) 03:27, 25 July 2012 (UTC)Reply

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