Talk:Volumetric concrete mixer

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Does the last part of this seem like an advertisement to anyone? Also, the truck diagram is a direct advertisement for Zimmerman Industries. Is there a better way to write this?

I have tried to rewrite and rearrange the second paragraph so as to make it seem less like an ad. In the process I had to remove quite a few words. Luke Warmater101 (talk) 22:25, 13 April 2009 (UTC)Reply

It reads more informational now, Luke.Radiostapler (talk) 14:36, 16 July 2009 (UTC)radiostaplerReply

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