Talk:Virgin Islands at the 2016 Summer Paralympics/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 16:51, 31 August 2018 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Hi Courcelles! I will complete a quick c/e of the article first. Feel free to revert any of the changes, as I will only make what I feel are non-controversial improvements. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:51, 31 August 2018 (UTC)

Copyedit

• Here is my copyedit.

Prose & MOS

• The acronym USVI is not mentioned anywhere in the article. Please define in the first use of United States Virgin Islands (USVI).
• Need consistent linking with Ivan Espinosa. he is linked in the infobox, but not the first use in the lead. Recommend if linking, per WP:DUPLINK, to link in the infobox, first time in the lead, and the table at the end.
• Cerebral palsy is linked twice. Recommend removing second link. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 17:03, 31 August 2018 (UTC)

Images

• No images used, except country flag, which is PD. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:51, 31 August 2018 (UTC)

References

• Reference 4 needs thew author Laura Hale.
• Reference 5 needs "PARALYMPIC NEWS SERVICE" in the citation.
• Reference 6 needs the author Andrew McGarry.
• All other references look good. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 17:02, 31 August 2018 (UTC)

Overall

• Overall, similar to past articles. Looks good, will put on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 17:02, 31 August 2018 (UTC)

• Thanks again, Gonzo_fan2007, have dealt with everything! Courcelles (talk) 18:15, 2 September 2018 (UTC)

• Looks good! Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 19:52, 2 September 2018 (UTC)