Talk:Victor Verity/GA1
Latest comment: 1 year ago by Sturmvogel 66 in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 16:49, 28 April 2023 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:49, 28 April 2023 (UTC)
- Images properly licensed
- Hyphenate short service and night fighting
- Done throughout. Zawed (talk) 09:31, 8 May 2023 (UTC)
- Spending the last two years of the war on non-combat duties seems a little odd as the RAF was not noted for its concern for its pilots, especially after D-Day. Is there anything available on why he was assigned these duties?
- No, not in sources. I do wonder if he had pissed someone off towards the end of his career, his final posting was as an admin in accounts! Zawed (talk) 09:31, 8 May 2023 (UTC)
- Either that or he'd been declared LMF and nobody wanted to publicize that.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:10, 10 May 2023 (UTC)
- Nicely done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:34, 3 May 2023 (UTC)
- Sturmvogel 66, thanks for the review! I have dealt with your comments and this is ready for another look. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 09:31, 8 May 2023 (UTC)