Talk:Vardar offensive/GA1

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Tomandjerry211 (alt) in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk · contribs) 22:43, 9 March 2016 (UTC)Reply

Hi, I will be reviewing this article. Here are the issues:

This is not a case of OVERCITE. I just put the sum of all necessary cites at the end of each paragraph.
  • Cite the quote and the previous paragraph.
  Done
  • Further reading section seems unnecessary.
  Done
  • Order your citations.
I put the References section into alphabetic order.
  • Many dup links. Those are: Vardar, Austria-Hungary, Allied Army of the Orient, Quadruple Alliance, Central Powers, Kalkandelen, Monastir, Prilep, Louis Franchet d'Espèrey, Belasica, Crna, and Stíp.
I have hopefully fixed any of those.--Catlemur (talk) 13:56, 10 March 2016 (UTC)Reply

--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 22:43, 9 March 2016 (UTC)Reply