Talk:Up Out My Face/GA1
Latest comment: 8 years ago by Calvin999 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Casliber (talk · contribs) 01:19, 15 October 2015 (UTC)
I willl take a look at this, make straightforward copyedits as I go (please revert if I accidentally change the meaning!) and jot questions below: Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 01:19, 15 October 2015 (UTC)
Ref 9 (the Eminem book) needs an ISBN number- Added. — Calvin999
Ref 25 - can we get a date on it?- There isn't one. — Calvin999
- Earwigs is ok
Copyright 2009 Rye Songs which is administered by Songs of Universal (BMI)/WB Music Publishing (ASCAP/Songs of Peer/March 9 Publishing (ASCAP).- is this a sentence? It has no verb in the main clause...- I've made it into a more complete sentence. — Calvin999
- A club music song which lasts for three minutes, forty-one seconds, its instrumentation makes use of a "thumping" marching band coda - problem here is the change of subject from "song" to "instrumentation". Needs a rejig to align subjects. (watch what I do and see if you like it.) - like this
- Thanks. — Calvin999 08:26, 15 October 2015 (UTC)
but Carey has always "vehemently" denied- no need to use and quote this word, use something like "strenuously", "strongly", "firmly", "emphatically" etc.- Changed. — Calvin999 10:13, 15 October 2015 (UTC)
Surely the last segment of the Production and composition, which is all the folks' views of the lyrics should go in reception?I'd add the date of the release of the remix with minaj into the lead, which is a bit short...- I have? — Calvin999 10:25, 15 October 2015 (UTC)
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