Talk:U Smile/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: (CK)Lakeshade✽talk2me 05:48, 27 June 2010 (UTC)

I am beginning the review below :) (CK)Lakeshade✽talk2me 05:48, 27 June 2010 (UTC)

• Image is 802 × 794 and extremely blurry, needs a re-upload and resizing.

Oops, I wasn't the original uploader and I forgot to fix.  Done

• References need reformatting, inconsistent dating and there is an issue with ref 9, please take a look.

This is still not done, Let me try to explain more. Take a look at ref 1, "Vena, Jocelyn (2010-03-16)" and look at ref 2 "Herrera, Monica (March 19, 2010)", with an accessdate "Retrieved 16 May 2010". They all to to follow "2010-06-06"' or June 6, 2010 for both accessdate and date of publication. (CK)Lakeshade✽talk2me 18:59, 27 June 2010 (UTC)

Great Work except ref 9 still needs an accessdate, then your done with the refs. (CK)Lakeshade✽talk2me 19:26, 27 June 2010 (UTC)

• "He also performed the song in American Idol along with "Baby" last May 19, 2010.[?]" Needs a source.  Done

• "U Smile" is a pop influenced and blue-eyed soul piano and instrument driven ballad.[2]" Too many and's, needs rephrased or broken up.  Done

• "It was written by Bieber, Jerry Duplessis, Arden Altino, and Dan August Rigo, and produced by Duplessis and Altino. According to Bieber, the song is dedicated to his fans" is included in the lead, but is not included in the text of the article, please include add it to composition or something.  Done It's included in the Background

• "He also said that he co-wrote the song with August Rigo, and told his fans to go as they are the ones who "give me my strength in this."[1]" This sentence does not make sense. (CK)Lakeshade✽talk2me 19:38, 27 June 2010 (UTC)

Simple Issues, Let Me Know When You Are Done, Other Than That Great Work On The Article! (CK)Lakeshade✽talk2me 05:48, 27 June 2010 (UTC)

• The song stayed on both charts for a weeks' length. Due to digital sales, the song also reached 98 in the United Kingdom. Numbers under 100 should be written (CK)Lakeshade✽talk2me 04:19, 1 July 2010 (UTC)

All My Concerns Have Been Addressed. Great Work On The Article, Im Passing It :) (CK)Lakeshade✽talk2me 04:32, 1 July 2010 (UTC)