Talk:USS Chew/GA1
Latest comment: 11 years ago by Tomobe03 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Tomobe03 (talk · contribs) 22:33, 22 May 2013 (UTC) I'll review this article.--Tomobe03 (talk) 22:33, 22 May 2013 (UTC)
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- There's definitely something missing in
After brief repairs at port in New York City, New York and refresher training at Guantanamo Bay Naval Base.
... she visits to the Azores ...
seems odd to me. I may be wrong, but perhaps "visited Azores" would be better.- There's also probably something missing in
At the outbreak of the attacked Pearl Harbor by the Empire of Japan that morning ...
- There are several structures like
...arrived at Philadelphia 13 September.
Is it possible to omit "on" before date here? I was under an impression it is not, but then again I'm not a native speaker of English, so I cannot be that sure.
I made a few copyedits, including one I'd suggest you review (marked so in associated edit summary). Overall nice article, no MOS or referencing issues to speak of.--Tomobe03 (talk) 20:23, 23 May 2013 (UTC)