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Biography Section
editDoes anyone else think the biography section reads like a CV/résumé? It sounds like his manager has written it - has many opinionated comments ("...delivering the sweet velvety vocals of a decade that defines not only a genre, but also a culture and a way of life..."), unverified claims ("...one of the leading bands in the region...") and just unnecessary romantic phrases ("...U-Jean is on the campaign trail for soul...").
In my opinion, it requires a re-write to be in the style of the rest of wiki's unbiased, fact-based articles; but I also recognise that others may disagree, hence this talk section :)
195.171.82.16 (talk) 23:35, 25 September 2021 (UTC)