Talk:Tui Manu'a Matelita/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 00:50, 23 July 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 00:50, 23 July 2018 (UTC)

Criteria

GA Criteria
GA Criteria: 1 1.a Y 1.b Y 2 2.a Y 2.b Y 2.c Y 2.d Y 3 3.a Y 3.b Y 4 4.a Y 5 5.a Y 6 6.a Y 6.b Y

• No DAB links Y
• No dead links Y
• No missing citations Y

Prose Suggestions

Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.

• Suggest expanding lede with information on her not marrying, or the dispute over her death.
• Contemporary and posthumous European and American accounts of her life portray her as a helpless figurehead and as a white queen of the South Seas. suggest changing "helpless" to "mere".

• @KAVEBEAR: That's all my suggestions, passing now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 11:49, 23 July 2018 (UTC)

  Changed prose as suggested.KAVEBEAR (talk) 16:46, 23 July 2018 (UTC)