Talk:Tropical Storm Sanba (2018)/GA1
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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 19:37, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
Will do. YE Pacific Hurricane 19:37, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
- "After traversing the Philippine islands," capital i. YE Pacific Hurricane 07:58, 28 May 2020 (UTC)
- "the JTWC determined that the system had opened up into a wave by 18:00 UTC on February 13.[9]" seems too much jagron. What is a "wave"? (Yes I know but the average reader isn't me). YE Pacific Hurricane 07:58, 28 May 2020 (UTC)
- In the MH, you refer to "PAGASA" with a "the" while the in the impact you include a "the". Which one is it? YE Pacific Hurricane 07:58, 28 May 2020 (UTC)
- "Shortly after Sanba's formation, the National Weather Service in Guam issued a tropical storm watch for western parts of Yap State, encompassing Fais, Ulithi, Yap, and Ngulu.[22][23] T" link to tropical cyclone warnings and watches. YE Pacific Hurricane 07:58, 28 May 2020 (UTC)
Great job all in all, BTW. YE Pacific Hurricane 07:58, 28 May 2020 (UTC)