Criteria 1: Pretty much done. Only need to add mentions of landfall. I have no idea who add the July 11 statement there, but if there is a possible source, as shown in its track, I will add it in. I just need to confirm that.
Criteria 2: Current. Removed Criteria 3, as to what I say is "if no source, then no mention". Typhoon2013(talk) 08:56, 2 October 2017 (UTC)Reply
Regarding my edits yesterday, I did some copyediting for grammar, and added non-breaking spaces and convert templates. Hopefully that settles some of the issues for Criteria 1. ~ KN2731 {t ⋅ c} 07:49, 7 October 2017 (UTC)Reply
Since not all issues have not been solved with these seven days, this nomination has failed.—CycloneIsaac (Talk) 16:50, 8 October 2017 (UTC)Reply
(a) it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline;
(b) reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose);[2]
"Soon after, the JTWC gave the system the internal designation of 05W, though they still classified it as a tropical depression." This sentence implies that they gave the designation as 5W but declared it as a depression earlier.
Did PAGASA upgrade Emong to a tropical storm before severe tropical storm?
"while Nanmadol was exiting the Philippine Area of Responsibility." Change to "when Nanmadol exited the Philippine Area of Responsibility."
There are more then one landfalls depicted on the track map. Those aren't mentioned.
"during July 8" On.
"During the next few days, the storm's remnants accelerated eastward towards Alaska, before dissipating off the coast of Alaska on July 11." Not referenced.
"The local government in Shimane, meanwhile, also urged residents to evacuate and issued a warning to 20,000 residents spanning some 9,200 households," is not "which promoted local officials to evacuate about 20,000 residents".
"During July 3" / "In July 10" You know what to do.
"began a bus" bus service?
"Trees with trunks of 50–60 cm (19.7–23.6 in) were washed away, which blocked the water stream further and thus exacerbated floods." Change to "blocking the water stream further and exacerbated floods."
"Therefore, on July 11, Forestry minister Yuji Yamamoto pledged to set up a task force to take a large driftwood, while an official at the University of Hyogo warned other municipalities of potential damage caused by fallen trees." Split these into two sentences.
Nagasaki should be linked the first time used.
"in Shikoku town of Muroto" Insert "the" between "in Shikoku".
"the iconic Shinkansen," That's an opinion.
"1,724 people. evacuated." Fragment.
"routes were already reopened over in some communities in the Fukuoka Prefecture." Routes of what?
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Fail
WTF!?
Pass
On hold