Talk:Tropical Storm Danny (2021)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Etriusus (talk · contribs) 05:19, 10 August 2023 (UTC)

Grabbing this review, notes will be forthcoming. 🏵️Etrius ( Us) 05:19, 10 August 2023 (UTC)

Etriusus, I believe everything is addressed now! Tails Wx (they/them) 11:50, 12 August 2023 (UTC)

Images

• Rights are in order
• No issue with captions
• Alt text is always recommended (optional)

Sources

• I see how the NHC website works, can you make the sourced link specific to the report rather than to the overall list? (FN 4,5,6,8)

 Done! Tails Wx (they/them) 11:50, 12 August 2023 (UTC)

• Consider archiving all sources (optional)

 Done! Tails Wx (they/them) 11:50, 12 August 2023 (UTC)

Copy-Vios

• Nothing of note. Spot checks and Earwig are clear.

Misc

• Page is stable
• Author is not the main contributor, but is a major contributor

Prose

• "briskly " WP:PUFFERY

 Done! Tails Wx (they/them) 04:33, 12 August 2023 (UTC)

• At 06:00 UTC on the next day, the system further strengthened into a tropical storm, attaining the name Danny east-southeast of Charleston, South Carolina. awkward wording

 Done! Tails Wx (they/them) 05:22, 12 August 2023 (UTC)

• anny then made landfall in Pritchards Island, north of Hilton Head, in a slightly weakened state at 23:20 UTC on the same day, with winds of 40 mph (64 km/h) and indicating that Danny weakened prior to moving inland. run-on sentence

 Done! Tails Wx (they/them) 05:30, 12 August 2023 (UTC)

• and a tropical depression in 1979 more specific

 Done! Tails Wx (they/them) 05:30, 12 August 2023 (UTC)

• "High rainfall amounts were" reword to "heavy rainfall was"

 Done! Tails Wx (they/them) 04:33, 12 August 2023 (UTC)

• "the low" establish synonym in the sentence prior

 Done! Tails Wx (they/them) 11:50, 12 August 2023 (UTC)

• 'buoy'... buoy what?

Clarified! Tails Wx (they/them) 11:50, 12 August 2023 (UTC)

Linked to Buoy. Tails Wx (they/them) 05:22, 12 August 2023 (UTC)

• "low model support." clarify

 Done Tails Wx (they/them) 11:50, 12 August 2023 (UTC)

• "The warnings on the state from Danny were canceled" typo, not 100% sure what you meant here

 Done! Tails Wx (they/them) 05:22, 12 August 2023 (UTC)

• along with a high risk of rip currents from Sumter to Charleston beaches idea is disconnected from the rest of the sentence

 Done! Tails Wx (they/them) 05:30, 12 August 2023 (UTC)

• that same day, a weather station at Folly Beach recorded a wind gust of 41 mph (66 kph) as Danny moved inland wrong section

 Done! Tails Wx (they/them) 04:33, 12 August 2023 (UTC)

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This will be all for now, kicking it back to you. 🏵️Etrius ( Us) 04:02, 12 August 2023 (UTC)

@Tails Wx Looks, good. I made some minor edits, please review when you can. At this time, I'm signing off on the GA, congrats!!!

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

🏵️Etrius ( Us) 04:22, 13 August 2023 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.