Talk:Tropical Storm Carlotta (2018)/GA1
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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 17:11, 11 April 2019 (UTC)
Will do. YE Pacific Hurricane 17:11, 11 April 2019
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- "Tropical Storm Carlotta was a tropical cyclone that caused flooding in southwestern Mexico" could you be more specific? YE Pacific Hurricane 03:24, 27 April 2019 (UTC)
- "After having increased in organization, the system was designated as a tropical depression on June 14. Late on the next day, the system strengthened into a tropical storm, after which it was named Carlotta" you could probably cut this down slightly to "Following an increase in organization, the system was designated as a tropical depression on June 14, and became a tropical storm the following evening." YE Pacific Hurricane 03:24, 27 April 2019 (UTC)
- "On June 16, Carlotta slowed down and unexpectedly stalled " isn't this fairly close to redundant? YE Pacific Hurricane 03:24, 27 April 2019 (UTC)
- " Around that time, the NHC forecasted that a mid-level ridge over" "forecasted" is not a word. YE Pacific Hurricane 03:24, 27 April 2019 (UTC)
- " with a contracting eye and more symmetric eyewall.[11]"link to eye (cyclone). YE Pacific Hurricane 03:24, 27 April 2019 (UTC)
- "In the NHC's last discussion "you don't explain what that is. YE Pacific Hurricane 03:24, 27 April 2019 (UTC)