Talk:Trar Dewan

Pahari Sahib (talk) 08:51, 30 September 2009 (UTC)

Copyedit

Who knows what the League of Copyeditors did? Look at these, inter alia: Its//kilomitres//&//in south of...city//near about//.aproxmatly//90% peoples//random commas and periods. The page despite its many edits seems to be fast approaching incomprehensibility--SilasW 10:17, 27 June 2007 (UTC).

No ref restored + minor rewrite

The no ref tag should not have been removed. What does "educated" mean? Literate? And if, say, children up to 7yo make 10% of pop'n with a life expectancy of 70 (and likely they are a much higher % of pop'n) then it seems unlikely that 90% are "literate" let alone the broader "educated". Cultural vanity rules.--SilasW (talk) 08:18, 22 October 2008 (UTC)

Please abide by WP conventions. Twice noref has been removed. This article gives no references. Next time perhaps mention of vandalism and suggested deletion shd be tagged.--SilasW (talk) 12:44, 3 February 2009 (UTC)

Please do not remove Templates which draw attention to deficiencies in articles until corrections have been made. Cultural vanity does not override the need for correct English. Merely as examples: a "sentence" with no verb, the incredible "90%".--SilasW (talk) 10:14, 30 September 2009 (UTC)

Regarding this, that was actually removed over two years ago along with the noref, that version did not need to be copyedited Pahari Sahib 11:29, 30 September 2009 (UTC)