Talk:Tjenare Mollberg, hur är det fatt?/GA1
Latest comment: 2 years ago by Kyle Peake in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:20, 6 February 2022 (UTC)
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Another nice looking article, which I will review shortly! --K. Peake 07:20, 6 February 2022 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
edit- Infobox looks good!
- Thanks.
- "is no. 45 in" → "is No. 45 in"
- Fixed.
- The best-known works part should be not be in the first para, as this info belongs around the area of the things mentioned as noted are
- Fixed.
- Remove wikilink on Poland
- Done.
- The subtitle sentence should be the second one of the first para instead
- Fixed.
Context
edit- Good
- Noted.
Song
editMusic and verse form
edit- Add text to the audio sample to establish relevance, plus the file is missing United States tag
- Done.
- Pipe Songs to Fredmans sånger on the img text
- Already done.
- Pipe 6
8 time to Time signature- Done. I'll note that this discards information; should Time signature ever become better structured, it might be that each time gets a subsection, at which point the new pipe will cause the link to fail to redirect properly. This is a general point, that redirects are often more specific than pipes even where they seem momentarily equivalent.
- Pipe ariette to Aria
- Done.
- "and its French performers brought it to Stockholm's" → "and was brought to Stockholm's" adding "by its French performers" after the theatre
- Not sure that passive for active is an improvement.
- Remove "the" before musicologist
- No, this is a normal British usage.
- "and the reality that the epistle was describing." → "and the reality described on the epistle."
- Done.
Lyrics
edit- The writing years are not mentioned by the source
- Kommentar tab, fixed. Massengale confirms.
- Pipe strings to String instrument
- Done.
- Pipe notaries to Notary
- Done.
- "The shoe-mender hits him," → "The shoe-mender hits Mollberg,"
- Done.
Reception and legacy
edit- Pipe Joseph II of Austria to Joseph II, Holy Roman Emperor and polska to Polska (dance) on the img text
- Done.
- "calls it a" → "calls the epstile a"
- Reworded.
- "Britten Austin explains that this" → "Austin explains that this" unless that is not the real name, then keep as Britten Austin
- BA is the surname.
- "Britten Austin notes that Mollberg is" → "Austin notes that Mollberg is" unless the above is true
- Ditto.
- "how another member of the Order of Bacchus, Kilberg, meets" → "how fellow Order of Bacchus member Kilberg meets"
- Done.
- If "a barrel is dripping"." is the end of a full sentence in the original source, then punctuation should be inside speech marks
- Done.
- "inspired Bellman to song, but that this epistle" → "inspired Bellman's work, but this epistle"
- Reworded.
- Pipe freedom of expression to Freedom of speech
- Done.
- Wikilink flute
- Done.
- Wikilink cello
- Done.
- Pipe EMI to EMI Records if this is the label referenced
- Done.
- "is corroborated by" → "is corroborated by the"
- Done.
- "in Fredman's ep. 45"." → "in Fredman's ep. 45."" since this is a full sentence
- Done.
- Pipe Lake Mälaren to Mälaren on the img text
- Done.
- Remove wikilink on Sätra for the second img
- Done.
References
edit- Copyvio score looks solid at 25.9%!!
- Noted.
- Add the language parameters to refs 10 and 13
- Added.
- WP:OVERLINK of Bellman Society on ref 11
- Done.
Sources
edit- Good
External links
edit- Good, especially with the YouTube publishers added!
- Thanks.
Final comments and verdict
edit- On hold until everything is fixed; once again, you have submitted a mostly good article! --K. Peake 08:39, 6 February 2022 (UTC)
- All done to date. Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:39, 6 February 2022 (UTC)
- ✓ Pass now, I added in a brief copy edit but this was totally fine elsewise before! --K. Peake 22:16, 6 February 2022 (UTC)