Talk:Thinkin Bout You (Frank Ocean song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 02:39, 23 June 2012 (UTC)Reply


GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):  
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):  
    b (citations to reliable sources):  
    c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):  
    b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  


Infobox

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  • Information is needed in the article to verify that "quiet storm" is one of the genres of the song

You're right, I've removed it.

Lead

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  • ...just out of his reach and the turmoil that brings... Change "brings" to "ensues"

Done

  • ...video directed by visual art group High5Collective released on September 15... Specify year this occurred

Done

  • Ocean performed Ocean performed the track during his seven show tour... Get rid of the first "Ocean performed"

Copy editing error, done.

Background

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  • At a listening part in 2012, it was confirmed that the track would appear on Ocean's Channel Orange.[6] Change "part" to "party"

Composition

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  • According to WP:SAMPLE, audio recordings have to be less than 10% of the original recording (it needs to be less than 20.1 seconds and is currently 25 seconds)

Reception

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  • No issues

Promotion

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  • No issues

Chart

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  • Fix the table so that it is closed

Done?

References

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  • References 3, 6, 8 Put publisher in
  • Reference 5 "iTunes Store" needs to be wiki-linked and should not be italicized
  • References 10, 25 "MTV" should not be italicized
  • References 20, 21 "Rolling Stone" and "Wenner Media" should not be italicized
  • Reference 26 "Billboard" and "Prometheus Global Media"

All done?

After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put it on hold at this time. There are some minor prose issues and reference formatting errors that are keeping this article from reaching good article status. I will give you the general days to fix these mistakes and/or address issues you believe do not affect good article status. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask. Rp0211 (talk2me) 03:05, 23 June 2012 (UTC)Reply

Since all of the issues have been addressed, I feel confident passing this article. Congratulations and keep up the good work! Rp0211 (talk2me) 05:01, 23 June 2012 (UTC)Reply