Talk:ThinkSystem

Latest comment: 1 year ago by StuartGill in topic Update to the ThinkServer Intro

objectivity

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This article has useful information. Unfortunately, it appears to be stitched together from marketing blurbs and press releases. It really needs to be cleaned up.

One small step in that direction: the Techpowerup article cited in the description of the TS430 was referred to as a review but in fact it is just a press release from Lenovo. Big difference! This sure looks like quote laundering. I corrected that. DHR (talk) 16:48, 18 November 2012 (UTC)Reply

Update to the ThinkServer Intro

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Hi. I work for Lenovo and have a disclosed conflict of interest. As stated in the page, the ThinkServer line has been renamed ThinkSystems. There is no ThinkSystems page yet (though someone started a draft). There are two things changes I'd like to request impartial editors consider:

  1. Adding "now known as ThinkSystems" to the first sentence
  2. Adding a redirect from ThinkServer to ThinkSystems

Thank you in advance to anyone that considers my requested changes. StuartGill (talk) 16:55, 21 June 2023 (UTC)Reply