Talk:Theodore Komnenos Doukas/GA1
Latest comment: 8 years ago by Sturmvogel 66 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 20:57, 16 December 2015 (UTC)
- One dead external link, no DABs
- Fixed link
- Isn't the coin electrum rather than silver?
- Indeed, an oversight on my part
- Although some of the lesser barons were freed, however, neither Peter nor many of the most senior lords remained in captivity until their death. The however doesn't make sense if both sets of men were eventually freed.
- Fixed
Link appanage- Nicely done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:57, 16 December 2015 (UTC)
- Thanks a lot. What about the usual questions regarding comprehensibility and the level of background information provided? Any point where prose ought to be further polished? Constantine ✍ 20:22, 18 December 2015 (UTC)
- Not that I noticed. I followed everything pretty easily, unlike on some of the Arab articles, but I actually know a little something about the Byzantines and their era.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 22:39, 18 December 2015 (UTC)
- Thanks a lot. What about the usual questions regarding comprehensibility and the level of background information provided? Any point where prose ought to be further polished? Constantine ✍ 20:22, 18 December 2015 (UTC)