Talk:The Young Victoria/GA1
Latest comment: 12 years ago by Aranea Mortem in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Aranea Mortem (talk • contribs • count) 15:55, 9 September 2011 (UTC)
I'll take this up, it's looking pretty good, and I'll probably pass it with some improvs.
- Could you remove the "of the United Kingdom" from Queen Victoria (first sentence)? It seems a little superfluous.
- BAFTA Award for Best Costume Design and BAFTA Award for Best Makeup and Hair need links on the last sentence of the lede.
- "Victoria moves into the just-completed Buckingham Palace" Victoria moves into a recently constructed/completed Buckingham Palace?
- "They also supported arts and sciences which was celebrated" I could be wrong, but is isn't it "that were celebrated"?
- "an historian" A his...
- "The producer later remembered, "She..." Lower case the s.
- Put a {{Track listing}} on the Music section, with the lengths of the tracks and such.
- Expand out the accolades from your article List of accolades received by The Young Victoria, just a couple more awards need be mentioned.
- The Home media section needs a bit of expansion, are there not any sources to be found to improve it?
- You should probs remove the Films about and TV about section from See also.
- There are 2 dablinks need fixing: AMC and The Blind Side. Aranea Mortem (talk to me) 16:12, 9 September 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review! I'll keep working on the others. Ruby comment! 16:13, 9 September 2011 (UTC)
- All of the rest of your great suggestions have now been implemented. Thanks again for the review! Kind regards, Ruby comment! 18:29, 9 September 2011 (UTC)
- Okay, good work, all passed! Aranea Mortem (talk to me) 13:44, 10 September 2011 (UTC)
- All of the rest of your great suggestions have now been implemented. Thanks again for the review! Kind regards, Ruby comment! 18:29, 9 September 2011 (UTC)