Talk:The Year of the Sex Olympics/Archive 1
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Real Sex Olympics
2012 will see the Games of the XXX Olympiad, the Sex Olympics come true?
boffy_b July 8, 2005 09:10 (UTC)
Passing GA
This was one of the oldest noms on the pile, so I decided to check it out.
This passes. It's well-sourced enough (though I would like to see more in the production history) and about as comprehensive as it could be (I'd like to see this now).
I would recommend some improvements in the prose. "Ironically" has to go; we let readers decide that even if it is rather obvious. "Self-appointed moral watchdog" may be literally true but is pejorative, and hence POV, in effect; I would substitute something like "television decency campaigner". In the intro, "anticipated" should replace "predicted".
It would be nice to see more pictures, but after reading the article I understand why they may be difficult to get. Good use of the pull-quote template as a substitute. Daniel Case 04:12, 17 May 2007 (UTC)
GA Sweeps (Pass)
This article has been reviewed as part of Wikipedia:WikiProject Good articles/Project quality task force. I believe the article currently meets the criteria and should remain listed as a Good article. The article history has been updated to reflect this review. Regards, MASEM 20:53, 18 February 2008 (UTC)
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