Talk:The Uninvited (1944 film)/GA1
Latest comment: 3 years ago by Andrzejbanas in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 00:44, 25 April 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:44, 25 April 2021 (UTC)
Infobox and lead edit
- Can the caption be "Theatrical release poster"?
- Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
- Add alt text to the image (WP:ALT).
- Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
- Washington, DC → Washington, D.C. (consistency)
- Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
- Remove the comma after Lewis Allen.
- Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
- Add a comma after Ruth Hussey.
- Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
- Add a comma after Harrison's Reports.
- Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
- Add a comma after Charlie Parker.
- Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
Plot and cast edit
- Plot is under 700 words - passes WP:FILMPLOT.
- Right on. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
- "grand-daughter" → "granddaughter"
- Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
- Dr Scott → Dr. Scott (consistency)
- Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
- Add a serial comma after "Rick, Pam" (both uses).
- Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
- "The group realize" → "The group realizes"
- Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
- Cast section looks good.
- Right on. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:45, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
Production edit
- Here and in other sections, combine citations from the same source.
- Done. I continued having citations where there was a quote though. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:54, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
- Add a serial comma after "A Matter of Life and Death (1946)".
- Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:54, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
- "in September 29, 1942" → "on September 29, 1942"
- Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:54, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
- "October 20th" → "October 20" (MOS:BADDATE)
- Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:54, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
- Add a comma after "a copy of The Uninvited".
- Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:54, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
- Add a serial comma after "Allen, Partos".
- Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:54, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
- Add a comma after "in fact".
- Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:54, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
Release edit
- "for the The" → "for The" (both uses to avoid repetition).
- Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:57, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
- Other than that, this section looks good.
- Sweet! Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:57, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
- Combine citations from the same source.
- Did this for some here. There's a few that I don't feel should be combined as they combine information from separate sources. But I've believe I've done what you asked. Andrzejbanas (talk) 11:18, 28 April 2021 (UTC)
Reception edit
- Lower the usage of quotes with WP:RECEPTION.
Legacy edit
- Try shortening the caption as it feels too long.
- Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 17:02, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
- Also add alt text (WP:ALT).
- Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 17:02, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
References edit
- Archive sources.
- Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 14:09, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
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