Talk:The Residences at The Ritz-Carlton (Philadelphia)/GA1

GA Review

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Starting GA review. Jezhotwells (talk) 17:49, 11 July 2009 (UTC)Reply

Quick fail criteria assessment

  1. The article completely lacks reliable sources – see Wikipedia:Verifiability.
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  2. The topic is treated in an obviously non-neutral way – see Wikipedia:Neutral point of view.
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  3. There are cleanup banners that are obviously still valid, including cleanup, wikify, NPOV, unreferenced or large numbers of fact, clarifyme, or similar tags.
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  4. The article is or has been the subject of ongoing or recent, unresolved edit wars.
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  5. The article specifically concerns a rapidly unfolding current event with a definite endpoint.
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No problems with quick fail criteria. Jezhotwells (talk) 17:53, 11 July 2009 (UTC)Reply

Checking against GA criteria

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  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):  
    • reasonably well written, I made one copy-edit. One point of concern: in th History section reference is made to E/R Associates and then further references are to E/R Partners. Consistency requires that one or other is used throughout. If they are different entities then this needs to be explained. Jezhotwells (talk) 18:16, 11 July 2009 (UTC)   DoneReply
Fixed. Medvedenko (talk) 03:29, 16 July 2009 (UTC)Reply
  1. b (MoS):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):  
    • No dead links.
    b (citations to reliable sources):  
    • Ref #7 is a personal web page, not RS. All other references OK.
While I feel the source is reliable, I tried to phase it out. One fact it referenced just backed up another source so I removed the ref, another fact it sources I can replace by this site, the third spot it is used is irreplaceable. I have never encountered an issue with the sources I have used before and wonder if you can give your advice on how to proceed. Medvedenko (talk) 03:29, 16 July 2009 (UTC)Reply
  1. Whoops I didn't have this on watch. Do you think the possible alternate ref I included in my above question is appropriate? I removed the facts in the way you said. Medvedenko (talk) 04:43, 21 July 2009 (UTC)Reply
    • It thinks everything is fine now. It is a pity that the personal website is the only reference available for the garden features and the double glazing. Commenting out as you did is best, it means someone may well come up with a source in due course. Jezhotwells (talk) 18:56, 21 July 2009 (UTC)Reply
    c (OR):  
  2. It is broad in its scope.
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    b (focused):  
  3. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  4. It is stable.
    No edit wars etc.:  
  5. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  6. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  
    OK , all fixed, I am happy to pass this as a good article. Jezhotwells (talk) 18:56, 21 July 2009 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the review and sorry for the late reply. Medvedenko (talk) 03:29, 16 July 2009 (UTC)Reply