Talk:The Pickwick Papers (1913 film)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Adamstom.97 (talk · contribs) 09:07, 17 October 2018 (UTC)

I'm taking this one for review. I'll be back soon with some more detailed feedback on the article, but the first thing that stands out to me is the lead: it needs to be bigger and more detailed, so that it gives an actual summary of the entire article. If you need a guide, then generally trying to have a sentence summary for each section of the body is a good place to start. - adamstom97 (talk) 09:07, 17 October 2018 (UTC)

I've now had a good look through the article, and my only other major concern is that there are a couple of web articles being used as sources here, and they do not have archives. Sort that out and the lead and we should be good to go. - adamstom97 (talk) 01:29, 19 October 2018 (UTC)

@Adamstom.97: Thanks for the review! I've implemented these changes, along with a few other tweaks. Let me know if you have any further comments. Lord Bolingbroke (talk) 15:52, 20 October 2018 (UTC)

That all looks pretty good. The only other thing that I would add to the lead is probably a line at the end about how only two of the reels have survived. Other than that, I am happy with coverage of the article and think it is well researched and written, so I am going to go ahead and pass this review. Congratulations! - adamstom97 (talk) 20:21, 20 October 2018 (UTC)

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