Talk:The Pasha's Daughter/GA1
Latest comment: 8 years ago by ChrisGualtieri in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 19:46, 26 June 2015 (UTC)
Nearly done. Two more to go. JAGUAR 19:46, 26 June 2015 (UTC)
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Checking against the GA criteria
edit- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar):
b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
- I would recommend splitting the lead into two paragraphs to make the lead more balanced, per WP:LEAD
- Nothing on the Production in the lead, despite the section being scarce the lead must summarise, even if it's minor
- The plot summary in the lead is quite extensive
- Is the list of people in the production sentence a definite list of people who worked on the film? The lead says otherwise
- The names in the Cast section are not in the lead
- The original story must be linked
- Production should be fleshed out
- a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- The assertions regarding the cameramen could be original research, but both candidates are included in the reference given.
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Why is every character always called Jack? But anyway, passing this on the grounds of research JAGUAR 21:51, 26 June 2015 (UTC)
- Ah yes, Jack and May - Lonergan liked those names and used them frequently. Though the characters were identified in official plot summaries - the audiences were not treated to names. For the purposes of Wikipedia, we use the names as intended - but you'll seen dozens of instances in which Jack and May are the names. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 05:34, 24 July 2015 (UTC)