Talk:The Orange Peels

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Jooojay in topic COI edits?

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Advert template was added today because the language used to write this article sounds like an advertisement with praise and fluffing and needs to be cleaned up. Jooojay (talk) 05:40, 5 October 2017 (UTC) Language has been updated:: and cleaned up. Neutral language is now implemented as well as citations to clarify and verify facts, timeline, and description. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lofiluther (talkcontribs) 19:20, 20 February 2021 (UTC)Reply

COI edits?

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Appears to possibly be a history of COI edits, with editors with related named to the band - like their record label and etc. Jooojay (talk) 08:47, 23 December 2018 (UTC) Citations have been added to clear up and verify facts. Descriptive language has been updated. Some level of description is necessary. In this case, references to the style of the music, and similarity to other artists by music critics have been cited from respected publications. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lofiluther (talkcontribs) 19:25, 20 February 2021 (UTC)Reply