Talk:The Mansion Family/GA1

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Dough4872 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Dough4872 (talk · contribs) 01:53, 16 November 2011 (UTC)Reply

GA review (see here for criteria)

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS):  
    • It may help to reorder the plot to describe Homer having the party in International Waters then move on to describe Mr. Burns at the Mayo Clinic so the reader does not have to jump back in forth in reading what Homer is doing.
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
    Is it possible to find a screenshot from this episode?
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

I will place the article on hold for a few concerns to be addressed. Dough4872 01:53, 16 November 2011 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the review! :) Theleftorium (talk) 14:27, 16 November 2011 (UTC)Reply
I will now pass the article. Dough4872 01:20, 17 November 2011 (UTC)Reply