Talk:The Little Mother/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 22:52, 19 September 2015 (UTC)

I should complete this tomorrow hopefully JAGUAR  22:52, 19 September 2015 (UTC)

Initial comments

• The leads needs to be expanded slightly to summarise the article. There is nothing on what critics thought about the film in the lead
• "The film stars Marie Eline who goes to her mother's employer" - does she have a character name?
• I would recommend splitting plot and production into two sections
• "The artist, a wealthy, good-hearted man, pleased with the child's pluck" - pluck??
• "The single reel drama, approximately 990 feet long" - always worth converting into metres

Close - promoted

I had to do a little bit of cleaning up, but this should be good to go. The references are adequate and the article is quite comprehensive given the era. Well done JAGUAR  16:36, 20 September 2015 (UTC)