Talk:The Fame Ball Tour/GA1

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GA Review

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Reviewer: --WillC 01:45, 14 December 2009 (UTC)Reply

GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  1. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  
    All major concerns have been addressed. Sorry for the long review, been busy. I'm passing the article.--WillC 00:33, 10 January 2010 (UTC)Reply
Lead
Background
Concert synopsis
Reception
  • "Yahoo! gave a positive review of the concert saying" - Who exactly gave the comments? Yahoo isn't a living person. Neither is The Boston Globe, Ottawa Citizen, Chicago Tribune, Billboard, Rolling Stone, and The Hollywood Reporter. Who are the people who say these statements? That should be noted. Makes for a better reception, and doesn't seem like it is just pulled from thin air.
  • "It was more than could be said for her opening act" - I don't remember an opening act mentioned. It is later, but that is later. It should be mentioned in Concert synopsis.--WillC 21:28, 3 January 2010 (UTC)Reply
  • "The tour received positive reviews for the live performance of Gaga and the whole concept and costumes, but the video footages and the backdrops were sometimes criticized." - Though the other info that follows may cover it, a source would be nice. If a source can not be given it would be better to leave this for last in the section and reword to "Overall, the tour received positive reviews for the live performance of Gaga and the whole concept and costumes, but the video footage and the backdrops were sometimes criticized."
Opening acts
North American Setlist
European / Asian / Australian Setlist
Additional notes
  • "On March 13, 2009 Gaga was presented with a plaque from the Recording Industry Association of America by social blogger Perez Hilton commemorating three million sales of her debut single "Just Dance", during her performance at the Wiltern Theatre. This show was also attended by rapper Kanye West." → "On March 13, 2009, Gaga was presented with a plaque from the Recording Industry Association of America by social blogger Perez Hilton commemorating three million sales of her debut single "Just Dance", during her performance at the Wiltern Theatre." Comma added and West attendance doesn't seem important to a concert. This should be in the reception section or in Gaga's article. I do believe note sections are frowned upon, you should find other places to stick these notes.--WillC 21:28, 3 January 2010 (UTC)Reply
Tour dates
Box office score data
References
  • What makes Huliq.com, iLikeMusic.com, Sun Media Corporation, and TourTracker all reliable? I am not familiar with any of them.
    • Removed the former two. Sun Media Corporation may be gossip, but Toronto Sun is not gosip and has credibility. However you have to cite sun media as they are the publishers. TourTracker is reliable because they list all important tour events and their dates. That's what it has been used for in this article. --Legolas (talk2me) 08:33, 4 January 2010 (UTC)Reply
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